Showing posts with label week 3. Show all posts
Showing posts with label week 3. Show all posts

Wednesday, September 7, 2016

Reading Notes Part C

Part C:
32) It talks about Vali, Ramas brother, beign attacked by an enemy and driving that enemy into a deep hole.
He then requires a guard named Sugriva to guard the hole for a whole year until the enemy came out.
It was believed that Cali had been attacked and killed and would never returned.
When he destroyed his enemy he returned to the hole but he couldn’t because the guard filled the whole up with dirt.
Finally when out he assumed his brother filled it up rather than the guard. HE assumed he wanted to keep him as a prisoner.
Vali took Sugrives wife out of spite.

Rama suggested that Sugriva challenge Vali to a battle in honor of his wife.



 

Reading Notes Part B

Part B:
33-34: The Golden Deer and The Chase
33) Maricha became the shape of a very beautiful deer. Lots of detail on what the deer looked like and lots of beautiful comparisons on what it looked like.
Sita spotted him first and told Rama to come see the beauty.
Rama then told himself he had to get this beautiful deer for her.
He spent a long day hunting and praying the deer would cross his path.
He saw a ton of different animals but not the deer.
34) He chased the deer a long way away and finally he shot an arrow straight through its heart.
Once shot Maricha sprang out of the deer and laid there crying out for Sita and then he died.
Sita questions if ramas brother has lost compassion for his brother.
Finally Lakshmana agreed to go check on Rama

Sita stated she would kill herself by many different ways if Rama was dead. 





Thursday, September 1, 2016

Storytelling Week 3: The Wedding

It was finally the day, the day that everyone, from the royalty of far off countries to the homeless families in Central Park, had been waiting for. It was the day of what seemed to be the biggest wedding in the 21st century. Both Raymond and Sandy were getting ready on opposite towers of the Four Seasons, while everyone was flooding in dropping off all of the presents and admiring the extravagant decorations. They got everything they could possibly need from fine china and diamonds, to flower arrangements and letters of congratulations. They both were too excited to focus on the presents. All they could focus on was that happy moment when they would be named husband and wife. Of course they knew they did not need all of these gifts but the public and their family and friends insisted on them. These people have always been in the spotlight and everyone had longed to see them together. This relationship had been in the works for years and it was finally happening. It took countless amounts of time preparing and getting everything perfect for their special day. Both the bride and groom could feel the clock ticking down to the time when the bride would make it down the aisle.

 Finally the clock struck five in the afternoon and the doors flung open to reveal the blushing bride. The groom waited for her, tearing up, as she took the long walk down the aisle. He waited at the bottom of the stairs to help escort her up to the altar. They both stared at each other as the vows began, soaking in this moment neither of them ever wanted to forget. The groom was told to cherish her all the days they lived and he said I do. The bride was asked similar vows and she promised to keep every single one. After their vows the whole room gathered in prayer to bless the couple on a long lasting marriage. The priest gave his blessing and he announced them man and wife. As soon as this took place the groom took his bride in his arms and placed a delegate yet passionate kiss on her pink lips.

 It did not take long for the music to fill the air and for the party to start. The reception hall was even more beautiful then where the ceremony took place. There was food of every origin, flowers from every country, and music playing from all around the world. Every guest felt like the reception was catered to their personal cultures, which caused guests to have the best time. The bride and groom said their hellos and gave their thanks but shortly after the music started to be blasted the groom took his bride away for the evening so they could celebrate their night on an intimate level. Even though the bride and groom had left, the town kept the party going. The whole town partied for a long time because they knew this was going to be the start of something great.



Author's Notes:

 I tried to make it a modern-day wedding day where the groom and bride are both big figures in America. I tried to describe the feelings and the emotions throughout the story. Even towards the end I tried to show the love and the eagerness to start their life together by leaving early. The inspiration for this story was Rama and Sita's wedding. I think it was a dream wedding where everyone seemed to be rooting for this couple. They had the perfect day and what seemed to be a perfect relationship. I wanted to portray that in a modern day wedding.  I think every girl can relate to wanting a big wedding and having that fairy-tale day. I think this will hopefully make an interesting and relatable piece that isn’t too hard for the readers to follow. I think taking a story like Rama and Sita's and making it relatable makes reading these stories more enjoyable and exciting. Overall I am happy with how this piece turned out and how it transformed from Rama and Sita's story, to a rough draft, and finally to this one I created. I also think it is a good story to expand on if I decide to do that in the future sometime. I hope everyone enjoys it and can relate to something throughout the piece.


Bibliography: Ramayana (Public Domain Edition), Romesh Dutt, 1899




Storytelling Week 3: The Wedding



It was finally the day, the day that everyone, from the royalty of far off countries to the homeless families in Central Park, had been waiting for. It was the day of what seemed to be the biggest wedding in the 21st century. Both Raymond and Sandy were getting ready on opposite towers of the Four Seasons, while everyone was flooding in dropping off all of the presents and admiring the extravagant decorations. They got everything they could possibly need from fine china and diamonds, to flower arrangements and letters of congratulations. They both were too excited to focus on the presents. All they could focus on was that happy moment when they would be named husband and wife. Of course they knew they did not need all of these gifts but the public and their family and friends insisted on them. These people have always been in the spotlight and everyone had longed to see them together. This relationship had been in the works for years and it was finally happening. It took countless amounts of time preparing and getting everything perfect for their special day. Both the bride and groom could feel the clock ticking down to the time when the bride would make it down the aisle.

 Finally the clock struck five in the afternoon and the doors flung open to reveal the blushing bride. The groom waited for her, tearing up, as she took the long walk down the aisle. He waited at the bottom of the stairs to help escort her up to the altar. They both stared at each other as the vows began, soaking in this moment neither of them ever wanted to forget. The groom was told to cherish her all the days they lived and he said I do. The bride was asked similar vows and she promised to keep every single one. The priest gave his blessing and he announced them man and wife.

 It did not take long for the music to fill the air and for the party to start. The bride and groom said their hellos and gave their thanks but shortly after the music started to be blasted the groom took his bride away for the evening so they could celebrate their night on an intimate level. Even though the bride and groom had left, the town kept the party going. The whole town partied for a long time because they knew this was going to be the start of something great.

Author's Notes:

 I tried to make it a modern-day wedding day where the groom and bride are both big figures in America. I tried to describe the feelings and the emotions throughout the story. Even towards the end I tried to show the love and the eagerness to start their life together by leaving early. The inspiration for this story was Rama and Sita's wedding. I think it was a dream wedding where everyone seemed to be rooting for this couple. They had the perfect day and what seemed to be a perfect relationship. I wanted to portray that in a modern day wedding.  I think every girl can relate to wanting a big wedding and having that fairy-tale day. I think this will hopefully make an interesting and relatable piece that isn’t too hard for the readers to follow. I think taking a story like Rama and Sita's and making it relatable makes reading these stories more enjoyable and exciting. Overall I am happy with how this piece turned out and how it transformed from Rama and Sita's story, to a rough draft, and finally to this one I created. I think it is also a good story to expand on if I decide to do that in the future sometime. I hope everyone enjoys it and can relate to something throughout the piece.


Bibliography: Ramayana (Public Domain Edition), Romesh Dutt, 1899




Storytelling Week 3: The Wedding



It was finally the day, the day that everyone, from the royalty of far off countries to the homeless families in central park, had been waiting for. It was the day of what seemed to be the biggest wedding in the 21st century. Both Raymond and Sandy were getting ready on opposite towers of the Four Seasons, while everyone was flooding in dropping off all of the presents and admiring the extravagant decorations. They got everything they could possibly need from fine china and diamonds, to flower arrangements and letters. They both could not focus on the presents all they could focus on was that happy moment when they will be named husband and wife. Of course they knew they did not need all of these gifts but the public and their family and friends insisted on them. These people have always been in the spotlight and everyone had longed to see them together. This relationship had been in the works for years and it was finally happening. It took countless amounts of time preparing and getting everything perfect for their special day. Both the bride and groom could feel the clock ticking down to the time when the bride would make it down the isle.

 Finally the clock struck five in the afternoon and the doors flung open to reveal the blushing bride. The groom waited for her, tearing up, as she took the long walk down the isle. He waited at the bottom of the stairs to help escort her up to the alter. They both stared at each other as the vows began, soaking in this moment neither of them ever wanted to forget. The groom was told to cherish her all the days they lived and he said I do. The bride was asked similar vows and she promised to keep every single one. The priest gave its blessing and he announced them man and wife.

 It did not take long for the music to fill the air and for the party to start. The bride and groom said their hellos and gave their thanks but shortly after the music started to be blasted the groom took his bride away for the evening so they could celebrate their night on an intimate level. Even though the bride and groom had left, the town kept the party going. The whole town partied for a long time because they knew this was going to be the start of something great.

Authors Notes:
 I tried to make it a modern day wedding day where the groom and bride are both a big figures in America. I tried to describe the feelings and the emotions throughout the story even towards the end I tried to show the love and the eagerness to start their life together by leaving early. I think this will hopefully make an interesting and relatable piece that isn’t too hard for the readers to follow.


Bibliography: Ramayana (Public Domain Edition), Romesh Dutt, 1899