There once was a long lost tale of a tree that not only was
the most beautiful tree in all of the land but also had healing powers...
Three young Princess’s used to sit in bed every night and
ask their mother to tell them the tale of the red bud tree. The mother would
tell them all about a tree with such beauty and powers that it could heal anything
and everyone that just smelled its beautiful buds. She told them about all the
different cases where peasants and royalty would travel miles and miles into
the woods and through the mountains until they came across the beautiful pink
and red tree. They requested this story for ten years no matter how many times
they had heard it, and every time their mother would be delighted to tell them again.
One night they were patiently waiting for their mother who never came in. They
ran to their father and asked where she was and why she wasn't there to tell
them the story. The king responded with the sad news that their mother had
fallen ill and probably would not make it much longer.
The girls went to their room and cried and while they were
crying and holding each other the oldest piped up and exclaimed that she had
the best idea... "We will go find the red bud tree!"
Author’s notes: I wanted to plan a story that was a little
different than the original Red Bud Tree story. I think my rendition of it will
be a little bit more in depth than the original and have a better point. In the
original the three Princes separately went to find this tree just to be able to
see it. When they thought it looked different and started arguing the King
cleared up the argument and told them they went at different seasons and to not
be concerned. I enjoyed the idea of the nature and adventure and that’s what I
hope to focus most of my time on.
Bibliography: Ellen C. Babbitt, More Jataka Tales
I really enjoyed your story. I thought the length was perfect and the writing was nicely done. I like how you explained the story of the redbud tree within your story. It made me sad the the queen fell ill and was no longer able to tell the story. You ended your story with a nice way to continue it. You could write a new story on the princesses journey to find the red bud. You could also add a new factor to the one you have now where the girls find the tree and make a tea out of the buds which brings the Queen back to health. Overall, great job. :)
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